Upgrading the Fortnite Website

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Fortnite is the most popular game out right now, which begs the question:

'Why do we need to upgrade the site if it's so popular already?'

Because it can actually make MORE MONEY and have a BIGGER PLAYERBASE.

 Feast your eyes on the changes I made:

Original:


Upgraded:


The upgraded version focuses on the competitive nature of the game by using the aggressive word 'Rule' instead of passive words like 'Play'.

I am not a fan of the word 'play' because it is boring and unimaginative. I eliminated almost every instance of the word (excluding its proper use in the call to action button).

I also moved the 'Level up. Unlock epic loot.' phrases before the call to action. Why? Because I want the readers to be drawn in by the rewards and achievements.

Other changes include separating and simplifying sentences. 'Want it all faster?' becomes 'Want it all now?' because urgency will result in ACTION.

Do you love Fortnite? Of course you do. So carry your passion with you everywhere you go.
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